Hi, I'm from Spain. Can you help me,please? Can you correct the grammar of this writting, please?
Buttonz
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Friday, 6th of August 2010 01:53:00 PM
Last week l was in Italy. During the flight we could see the snowy Buttonz mountains and the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia Registered User about half past three and from there we took the bus.
In Bolonia we Joined: Monday, 10th of May 2010, 12:02:45 saw the Neptune fountain and the others sculpture from the Renaissance in Posts: 1217 the Piazza Maggiore and in the Basilica of Saint Petronio.
From Viewed 12160 times Bolonia we went to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery and the Duomo
Cathedral of Florencia that it had a wonderful stained glass windows and
their ceiling and domes were covered by painting. In addition we saw the
Fontana of Neptune and others more Renaissance sculpture. And we saw the
famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous and great monument.
In
Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town and from there we took
beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia standed out for its high
and it large Cathedral.
Then we visited the Piazza di campagna,
where they celebrate the typical horse race the medieval. One in 2 July in
honour to the Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”),
And
another race in 16 August in honour to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo della
l´Assunta”).
We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble and
the face of Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio.
The weather in
Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that it was raining
but also there were three days that it was sunny.
We also stood at
the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main square. />The village had high towers and very green landscapes. It was the place
that l loved it. From there we travel to Rome and we visit the Fontana di
Trevi.
The next day we went to Pompeya and we saw the famous
volcano, Vesubio and the grave town by the ashes. There were petrified
bodies by the ashes of Vesubio.
The street were irregular and it
wasn´t easy to walk by them We returned to Rome and we stayed at the
Piazza di Espagna and there we started to sing the “Macarena” and
another songs with the English tourists It was amazing and extremely
funny.
What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint
Maria Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo and Saint Pietro.
We
also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral stair
case and the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
What’s more we saw the Castel
Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of angels.
In the
afternoon we visit the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa and we took
the typical pictures with the tilt tower. In the end we took the plane to
come back home.
In conclusion, l definitely wanna go back one
day ,it’s worth it. />*******************************************************************************/>If you have more ideas or you think that l have to change something,
please tell me I will be grateful to hear it.
P.D: ''Fresh'' is a
kind of picture of art but l do not know its name in english.
Thanks
for all.
honey bun
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Saturday, 7th of August 2010 06:29:48 AM
It is very good. I put in some minor corrections. honey bun Registered User Last week I was in Italy. During the flight, we could see the snowy Joined: Thursday, 6th of May 2010, 00:41:33 mountains & the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport in Bolonia Posts: 1188 about half past three & from there we took the bus. Viewed 12557 times In Bolonia, we saw the Neptune fountain & the other sculptures from the
Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore & in the Basilica of Saint Petronio.
From Bolonia we went to Florencia, where we visited the Baptistery & the
Duomo Cathedral of Florencia. It had wonderful stained glass windows &
their ceiling & domes were covered by paintings. In addition, we saw the
Fontana of Neptune & other Renaissance sculpture. We also saw the famous
David of Miguel Angel, an enormous & great monument.
In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town & from there we took
beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia stood out because of its
high, large cathedral.
Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate on July 2 in
honor of the Virgin of Provenzano (“Palo Provenzano”) There was a
medievil horse race, another race on August 16th in honor to the Virgin
Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”). .
We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble & the face of Duomo with
fresh of Pinturicchio.
The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that
it was raining but ,also there were three days that it was sunny.
We also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main
square.
The village had high towers & very green landscapes. It was the place that
I loved . From there we traveled to Rome & we visited the Fontana di Trevi.
The next day we went to Pompeya & we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio & the
grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of
Vesubio.
The street were irregular & it wasn´t easy to walk by them.
We returned to Rome & we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna & there we
started to sing the “Macarena” & another songs with the English
tourists It was amazing & extremely funny.
What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore
(Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo & Saint Pietro.
We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral
stair case & the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
What’s more we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of
statues of angels.
In the afternoon we visited the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa &
we took the typical pictures with the tilted tower.
In the end we took the plane to come back home.
In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it.
Also, many of the sights you list have different names in English For
instance Bologna not Bolonia. Florence instead of Florencia.The Virgins
Ascent not Virgin Assunta There are too many for me to correct. Try typing
them into google for English translations.
BABY CHEEKS
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Sunday, 8th of August 2010 03:59:55 PM
Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the BABY CHEEKS snowy mountains & the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Registered User Bolonia about half past three & from there we took the bus. Joined: Wednesday, 21st of April 2010, 11:25:03 In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain & the other(s) sculptures* from the Posts: 821 Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore & in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. Viewed 10516 times From Bolonia we went to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery & the
Duomo Cathedral of Florencia, (that) it had a wonderful stained glass
window(s) & the(ir) ceiling & domes were covered (by)with* paintings*. In
addition we saw the Fontana of Neptune & other(s more) Renaissance
sculpture. And we saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous &
great monument.
In Siena(,).* We went up to the highest point of the town & from there we
took beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia (standed) stood* out
(for) with* its high & (it) large Cathedral.
Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical
medieval* horse race (the medieval). (One in) on* 2 July in honour to the
Virgen of provenzano (“Palo provenzano”),
And another race in 16 August in honour to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo
della l´Assunta”).
We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble & the face of Duomo with
(fresh) a fresco* of Pinturicchio.
The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that
it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny.
We also stood (at) in* the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in
the main square.
The village had high towers & very green landscapes. It was the place that
I loved (it)most*. From there we (travel)travelled* to Rome & we
(visit)visited* the Fontana di Trevi.
The next day we went to Pompeya & we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio & the
grave town (by) in* the ashes. There were petrified bodies (by)in* the
ashes of Vesubio.
The streets were (irregular) uneven* & it wasn´t easy to walk (by) in*
them.* We returned to Rome & we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna & there
we started to sing the “Macarena” & another song(s) with the English
tourists.* It was amazing & extremely funny.
What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore
(Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo & Saint Pietro.
We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral
stair case & the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
(What’s more) Added to that* we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there
were a lot of statues of angels.
In the afternoon we (visit)visited* the Partenon. The next day we stood in
Pisa & we took the typical pictures with the (tilt)tilted* tower. (In the
end) Finally we took the plane to come back home.
In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day, it’s worth it.
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Enhorabuena, que bueno!
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Include the words or letters with a *
I enjoyed reading about ur holiday.
noodle foodle:)
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Monday, 9th of August 2010 01:04:17 AM
Last week I was in Italy. During the flight I could see the noodle foodle:) snowy mountains & the green landscapes. I arrived at the Bolonia airport Registered User about three thrity & from there I took the bus. Joined: Saturday, 8th of May 2010, 15:16:34 In Bolonia I saw the Neptune fountain & the other sculptures from the Posts: 1135 Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore & in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. Viewed 16671 times From Bolonia I went to Florencia where I visited the Baptistery & the
Duomo Cathedral of Florencia that it had a wonderful stained glass windows
& their ceiling & domes were covered by painting. In addition, I saw the
Fontana of Neptune & other more Renaissance sculptures. And I saw the
famous David of Miguel Angel, an enormous & great monument.
In Siena, I went up to the highest point of the town & from there I took
beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia stood out for its high &
large cathedral.
Then I visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the medival
horse race. Once on 2 July in honor to the Virgin of provenzano (“Palo
provenzano”),
And another race in 16 August in honor to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo
della l´Assunta”).
I saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble & the face of Duomo with
fresh of Pinturicchio.
The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that
it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny.
I also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main
square.
The village had high towers & very green landscapes. It was the place that
I loved. From there I traveled to Rome & visited the Fontana di Trevi.
The next day I went to Pompeya & I saw the famous volcano, Vesubio & the
grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of
Vesubio.
The street were irregular & it wasn´t easy to walk in them. I returned to
Rome & I stayed at the Piazza di Espagna & there I started to sing the
“Macarena” & another songs with the English tourists It was amazing &
extremely funny.
What’s more the next day I visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore
(Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo & Saint Pietro.
I also visited the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral
stair case & the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
What’s more is I saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of
statues of angels.
In the afternoon I visit the Partenon. The next day I stood in Pisa & I
took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. On the last day, I took an
airplane home.
In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it.
**************************************.
Dickens
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Tuesday, 10th of August 2010 03:54:47 AM
My corrections will be IN CAPS with ** Dickens Registered User Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the snowy Joined: Tuesday, 1st of June 2010, 04:23:32 mountains & the green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia Posts: 1162 about half past three & from there we took the bus. Viewed 7277 times In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain & the others sculpture from the
Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore & in the Basilica of Saint Petronio.
From Bolonia we went to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery & the
Duomo Cathedral of Florencia *AND* it had a wonderful stained glass
windows & their ceiling & domes were covered by *MANY* painting*S*. In
addition*,* we saw the Fontana of Neptune & *OTHER FOUNTAINS* *AND THE*
Renaissance sculpture. *ALSO* we saw the famous David of Miguel Angel, an
enormous & great monument.
In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town & from there we took
beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia standed out for its high &
it*'S* large Cathedral.
Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical
horse race the medieval. One *ON JULY 2ND* in *HONOR* to the Virgen of
provenzano (“Palo provenzano”),
And another race *ON AUGUST 16* in *HONOR* to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo
della l´Assunta”).
We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble & the face of Duomo with
fresh of Pinturicchio.
The weather in Italy was *PRETTY NICE*. However, there were three days
that it was raining but also there were three days that it was sunny.
We also stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main
square.
The village had high towers & very green landscapes. It was the place that
I loved *(TAKE OUT IT)*. From there we travel*ED* to Rome & we visit*ED*
the Fontana di Trevi.
The next day we went to Pompeya & we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio & the
grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of
Vesubio.
The street were irregular & it wasn´t easy to walk *ON* We returned to
Rome & we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna & there we started to sing the
“Macarena” & another songs with the English tourists It was amazing &
extremely funny.
*(TAKE OUT WHAT'S MORE)*The next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria
Maggiore (Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo & Saint Pietro.
We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral
stair case & the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
*(TAKE OUT WHAT'S MORE)*
*THEN,*we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of statues of
angels.
In the afternoon we visit*ED* the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa
& we took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. In the end we took the
plane to come back home.
In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it *WAS* worth it,
my main sconee .
,
Wednesday, 11th of August 2010 09:36:17 PM
Last week I was in Italy. During the flight we could see the my main sconee . snowy mountains & the green landscapes. We arrived at the airport of Registered User Bolonia about half past three & from there we took the bus. Joined: Saturday, 1st of May 2010, 10:15:18 In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain & the others sculpture from the Posts: 1307 Renaissance in the Piazza Maggiore & in the Basilica of Saint Petronio. Viewed 2097 times From Bolonia we went on to Florencia where we visited the Baptistery & the
Duomo Cathedral of Florencia. It had wonderful stained glass windows &
their ceiling & domes were covered by paintings. In addition we saw the
Fontana of Neptune & Renaissance sculpture, & more. Then we saw the famous
David of Miguel Angel, it was an enormous & great monument.
In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town & from there we took
beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia standed out for its high &
its large Cathedral.
Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where they celebrate the typical
horse race the medieval. One in 2 July in honour to the Virgen of
provenzano (“Palo provenzano”),
And another race in 16 August in honour to the Virgin Assunta (“Palo
della l´Assunta”).
We saw the fountain Gaia, which is made out of white marble & the face of
Duomo with fresh of Pinturicchio.
The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days that
it was raining but there were also three days that it was sunny.
We stood at the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in the main
square.
The village had high towers & green landscapes. It was the place that I
loved. From there we traveled to Rome & we visited the Fontana di Trevi.
The next day we went to Pompeya & we saw the famous volcano, Vesubio & the
grave town by the ashes. There were petrified bodies by the ashes of
Vesubio.
The street were irregular & it wasn´t easy to walk on. We returned to
Rome & we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna & there we started to sing the
“Macarena” & other songs with the English tourists It was amazing &
extremely funny.
What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore
(Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo & Saint Pietro.
We also visit the Capilla Sixtina, the Vaticano museum with its spiral
stair case & the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
What’s more we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were a lot of
statues of angels.
In the afternoon we visit the Partenon. The next day we stood in Pisa & we
took the typical pictures with the tilt tower. In the end we took the plane
to come back home.
In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day ,it’s worth it.
Crazy Legs
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Thursday, 12th of August 2010 05:55:35 PM
Last week I VISITED Italy. During the flight THERE we SAW snowy Crazy Legs mountains & green landscapes. We arrived to the airport of Bolonia AT about Registered User half past three & there we took the bus TO THE CITY. Joined: Saturday, 24th of April 2010, 16:10:28 In Bolonia we saw the Neptune fountain & the others sculptureS from the Posts: 448 Renaissance WHICH WERE in the Piazza Maggiore & in the Basilica of Saint Viewed 15630 times PetER.
From Bolonia we went to FlorencE where we visited the Baptistery & the
Duomo Cathedral of FlorencE that had wonderful stained glass windows &
ceiling & domes covered by painting. In addition we saw the Fountain of
Neptune & other more Renaissance sculptures. FURTHERMORE we saw the famous
David of MICHAELANGELO. IT WAS enormous & A great monument.
In Siena, we went up to the highest point of the town & from there we took
beautiful panoramic photos. The Tower of Mangia stOOD out BECAUSE OF its
hEIGHT & ITS large Cathedral.
Then we visited the Piazza di campagna, where the MEDIEVAL HORSE RACE IS
HELD EVERY YEAR - one on 2nd July in honour of the Virgen of provenzano
(“Palo provenzano”), & another race on 16th August in honour OF the
Virgin Assunta (“Palo della l´Assunta”).
We saw the fountain Gaia made of white marble & the face of Duomo with
fresh of Pinturicchio. [?? Not sure what you are saying here]
The weather in Italy was quite good. However, there were three days WHEN
it was raining, but also there were three days WHEN it was sunny.
We also [pass through??] the medieval village of Gimignano with a well in
the main square.
The village had high towers & very green landscapes. It was the place that
I fell in love with. From there we travelled to Rome & we visit the Fontana
di Trevi [English would say Trevi Fountain].
The next day we went to Pompeya & saw the famous volcano, Vesubio [or
Vesuvius] & the town buried by the ashes. There were petrified bodies
COVERED WITH the ashes of Vesubio.
The street were irregular & it wasn´t easy to walk ON them We returned to
Rome & we stayed at the Piazza di Espagna. WHILE WE WERE there, we sAng the
“Macarena” & other songs with SOME English tourists. It was amazing &
extremely funny.
What’s more the next day we visit the Basilicas, Saint Maria Maggiore
(Piazza of Popolo), Saint Pablo & Saint Pietro. We also visitED the
Capilla Sixtina [Sistine Chapel], the Vaticano museum with its spiral
staircase & the Pieta of Miguel Angel.
FURTHERMORE we saw the Castel Saint Angelo where there were lots of
statues of angels. In the afternoon we visit the Partenon [Parthenon in
English]. The next day WE WERE in Pisa & we took the USUAL pictures with
the LEANING tower. In the end we took the plane to come back home.
In conclusion, I definitely want to go back one day. It WAS worth it.
(I have changed some of the names to their English spelling, but not all.
You may want to change them all or keep their Italian/Spanish forms. But
be consistent, i.e., have them all in English or all in Italian/Spanish.
Don't mix. The upper cases are just to show you what were changed.)
Muy bien.
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